Monday, October 9, 2006

2006/10/03 Language Evaluator's Report

Grammarian: Jane Yang

1. When we use credit card, we are over the limit. We can say: I maxed it out.

Max is abbreviated from maximize.

2. “incase”

“Just in case” is used to insure against the unfortunate possibility that it might happen. The expression “in case” is two words not one.

3. “brain death” = vegetable 植物人

4. “Sales pitch” a technical expression language, for products promoting. 推銷商品的言辭,商品宣傳 sales talk

5. Time is going fast (X)

Time flew or Time went by fast.

6. take out an insurance policy insurance policy (保險單) or certificate of insurance

7. One head is better two heads.(x)

“Two heads are better than one.” It means same as Chinese proverb “三個臭皮匠勝過一個諸葛亮

8. I am expecting. (X) I am exciting. (X)

I am anticipating. I am excited.

9. Put these money working.

Because “money” is uncountable noun and describe particular money, use “the money” instead of.

10. If I didn’t have enough money, I just could use my credit card.

When I went out and have fun, I didn’t need to worry someone would steal my money.

Both “if” and “when”,

When expressing the habit or fact, the condition clauses do not use past tense, instead, use present tense.

I’ve searched some information for your reference. As the following:


Present Unreal Conditional

The present Unreal Conditional is used to talk about what you would do in imaginary situations in general.

For present unreal events, we put the verb in the condition clause one step back — into the past:

Form

{If + S+ were /V-ed (simple past).., S+ should / would / might / could + base V}

Or

{S + would + verb….if + S + simple past….}

Example

If I won lottery, I would quit my job the next day. (But I don’t win the lottery.)

She would travel around the world if she had more money. (But she doesn’t have much money.)

If the Bulls won another championship, Roberto would drive into Chicago for the celebration.

I wish I had tickets. Note that wishing is always an unreal condition.

If they were available anywhere, I would pay any price for them.

If he were a good friend, he would buy them for me.

Present Real Conditional

The Present Real Conditional is used to talk about what you normally do in real-life situations.

Form

{If / When + S + Simple Present…., S + Simple present….}

Or

{S + simple present…if / when + S + simple present…}

If I go to a friend’s house for dinner, I usually take a bottle of wine or some flowers.

When I have a day off from work, I often go to the beach.

If the weather is nice, she walks to work.

Jerry helps me with my homework when he has time.

I read if there is nothing on TV.

Both “if” and “when” are used in the Present Real Conditional.

Using “if” suggests that something happens less frequently.

Or to use “if” for things that will possibly happen.

Using “when” suggests that something happens regularly.

Or to use “when” for things that are sure to happen.

When I have a day off from work, I usually go to the beach.

(I regularly have days off from work.)

If I have a day off from work, I usually go to the beach.

(I rarely have days off from work.)

When I go shopping, I’ll buy some food. (for sure)

If I go shopping, I’ll buy some food. (it’ possible)

Past Unreal Conditional

The past unreal conditional is used to talk about what you had not done in the past situations but you might also have imagined what you would have done.

For past unreal events — things that didn't happen, but we can imagine — we put the verb in the condition clause a further step back — into the past perfect:

Form:

{If + S + had + P.P, S + should / would / might / could + have + P.P.}

Or

{Had + S + P.P,………}

Example:

If she had seen the singer, she would have been very excited.

Had she seen the singer, she would have been very excited.

(But she did not see that singer.)

My business trip to California was only two days. If the trip had been longer, I would have visited my friends in Los Angeles.

If the Pacers had won, Aunt Glad would have been rich.

If she had bet that much money on the Bulls, she and Uncle Chester could have retired.

I wish I had lived in Los Angeles when the Lakers had Magic Johnson.

If I had known you were coming, I would have baked a cake.

Future Conditionals versus Hypothetical Conditionals

When we want to predict something conditional about the future (what we think might happen), we can use the present tense in the if clause and will or be going + the base form of the verb in the result clause.

· If Jeffrey grows any taller, the basketball coach is going to recruit him for the team.

· If he doesn't grow more, the coach will ignore him.

If you want to practice more, here is a good web site that you can test yourself.

http://www.englishpage.com/conditional/conditionalintro.html

Friday, October 6, 2006

2006/10/03 Wade's C10 Speech

You are my partner

Long long time ago, there was a high noble birth who got a lot of fortune. He was as rich as a king. However, at the same time one thing bother him. Because he needs housekeepers to manage his big fortune and business. He decided to test them. One day, he was going to a distant country. And he called three of his most ability housekeepers here and gave each of them ten mints of gold, and said. Put these money work until I come back.

Time is going fast, this noble birth returned home; he called for three housekeepers here and asked them how did they manage money. The first housekeeper come and said, master, your gold has make ten more. His mater replied satisfied: well done, man, you have been trustworthy in this very small matter, take charge of my ten business.

The second come and said, sir, your gold has earned five more. This noble birth answered, good job, and you take charge of my 5 business.

The last one come and said, dear my master, here is your gold, I keep your money and wrapped them with the precise cloth and hide them in my pillow. The gold is as precise as my life. His master replied with angry; Poor man, you are wasting my money, you are wasting my time. I regret put my money to you instead of depositing them in the bank. Then l could collected it with interest. Then he took away gold from the third man, and gave it to the one with making ten more mint of gold.

Dear members, this is the story I picked out from the bible. Maybe you will think, what does this story work to me? I am not as rich as bill gates, I neither got the lottery, We image, if one of us were the fourth one, how do you do? How do I do? Waste all of money and run away before the master come back. Or maybe I will union another three housekeeper, and put money together and cooperate among four of us to make a new business to roll much bigger money. One head is better than 2 heads, 2 heads are bigger than 5. Teamwork is the major current.

Wang Chen-Ming, Taiwan’s pressure star, he just got 19 wins of professional baseball contest of United States. His performance evokes the revolution of American professional baseball field. His major pitches, sinker, makes the most ground balls and he depends on his teammates defending to make opponents out. Strike-out is not his major. On the other hand, he trusts his partner, and they work as a team to win the game.

I work for the woodworking machinery company. I am impressed with one of our customers in Malaysia. He has been working with 2 of his partner for more than 20 years. He was in charge of sales; the other one was for design and manufacturing proceed; and another one takes charge of financial control. They work out their profession, build discipline, loyal each other, and public communication. Now their company, is the number 1 of woodworking machinery in South Malaysia. He told me a truth, there is no hero at this time. Working each other is the best way to get the maximum profit.

It has been my pleasure joining Alemax club. We are a big family. Every time I attend meeting with assignment, I am nervous, I am pressed, and I am exciting and expecting. I am nervous, because I hope to deliver a good speech for all of you. I am expecting, because I want to know how do Lillian introduce me to here. I am pressed because timer is going to show red sign to me. I am expecting because I feel like listening to how does John evaluate my speech. I am exciting because I hope to know if I am the best speaker tonight. I am appreciated because Jane, Keny, and other members put all stuffs set up for the meeting. We are partners to make high quality meeting every time. Dear members, we are not the guest, we are the master.




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